Comments on: Suckitis –> Aha Moment http://www.realmsoftheraven.com/2006/02/23/suckitis-aha-moment/ Home of Author Maura Anderson Mon, 08 Aug 2011 01:35:08 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Tyler B http://www.realmsoftheraven.com/2006/02/23/suckitis-aha-moment/comment-page-1/#comment-7760 Tyler B Sat, 25 Feb 2006 08:29:00 +0000 http://www.realmsoftheraven.com/%posttitle%#comment-7760 Hey, girl, sounds like you've made some good changes. Feel like sending me an updated version? Hey, girl, sounds like you’ve made some good changes. Feel like sending me an updated version?

]]> By: Jaynie R http://www.realmsoftheraven.com/2006/02/23/suckitis-aha-moment/comment-page-1/#comment-7759 Jaynie R Sat, 25 Feb 2006 00:59:00 +0000 http://www.realmsoftheraven.com/%posttitle%#comment-7759 I actually thought it was quite good in the hero's POV so it will be interesting to see what you've done with the heroine's POV.<br/><br/>Just don't use velvety *g* I actually thought it was quite good in the hero’s POV so it will be interesting to see what you’ve done with the heroine’s POV.

Just don’t use velvety *g*

]]> By: C http://www.realmsoftheraven.com/2006/02/23/suckitis-aha-moment/comment-page-1/#comment-7758 C Fri, 24 Feb 2006 18:11:00 +0000 http://www.realmsoftheraven.com/%posttitle%#comment-7758 It's not that it was a bad scene (although I think the idea of changing the POV is perhaps a pretty good one for making it better. <br/><br/>But Hon, I'm a GUY.. first kiss scenes are nice and all, but they don't do it for me no matter how well written.. <br/><br/>But when you get to the oral sex, be sure to let me have a preview (read.. a preview READ woman... ) It’s not that it was a bad scene (although I think the idea of changing the POV is perhaps a pretty good one for making it better.

But Hon, I’m a GUY.. first kiss scenes are nice and all, but they don’t do it for me no matter how well written..

But when you get to the oral sex, be sure to let me have a preview (read.. a preview READ woman… )

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